Descriptive Paragraphs - The Race

W.A.L.T Write descriptive paragraphs

I enjoyed writing this because it is descriptive next time I will use more words that are interesting

On the congested Biking Track, it was 28 degrees, the sun was scorching hot and the competitors were racing their hearts out. On the other side of the fence families are cheering and motivating the athletes. Rivals on the track, an unbeatable athlete passes biker after biker. From first place to last place is the unstoppable athlete.

Families trying to escape the fence are clicking their cameras distracting the athletes. On the track the athletes are trying to ignore the flashes of the camera and continue riding. Almost at the destination, the unbeatable athlete close to go over the finish line and once again conquer the race. But then suddenly a victorious athletes zooms past to be the first and only athlete to beat the invincible athlete.