I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Wednesday, 5 July 2017
The Legend of The Statue Of Liberty
The past few weeks my class has been writing our own legends.
I enjoyed doing this because I got to be creative and write my own legend. My next step is to use other words so that I don't repeat the words I have already used.
Well done Amiele. You are a great author and have used descriptive writing well to paint a picture in my head. I like that you created your own images to go with this.
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Well done Amiele. You are a great author and have used descriptive writing well to paint a picture in my head. I like that you created your own images to go with this.
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