WALT... Use the correct structure for a recount. This week for writing we have been writing recounts. I enjoyed doing this becuase I got to write about the holidays. Next time I will add more descriptive words.
One the first week of the holidays my family invited over some friends for Easter, at our house.
First one family of friends arrived. They had children so we went to a park. The park was close so we just walked there. When we reached the park we went one the slide and swings. We continued to play on the playground until we decided that we would go back to the house.
A couple of minutes after we got to the house, one of my dad’s friends and his son came. So we decided to eat the pizza and some chocolate eggs. Once we were finished eating the adults talked at the table while we played naughts and crosses in the living room.
Then about an hour later another two people arrived, while the other two families left because they were tired and wanted to leave. After they left I went to go and watch Netflix because there was nothing else to do.
I enjoyed having people over at our house because we usually don’t have many guests. Though when the people it got a bit boring
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