Tuesday 16 May 2017

Under The Rug

This week we got a photo with the first sentence of the story. We then had to be creative and write a story with the first sentence. I enjoyed doing this because I got to come up with my own story following a sentence. Next time I will be more descriptive and have paragraphs.

Two weeks past and it happened again. Ben was sitting calmly in his chair when he had heard a noise and felt a breeze. He looked from corner to corner looking for what it was but there was nothing there. Again he heard the noise, he got up grabbed his chair and smashed it where he heard a noise but nothing happened. Then he saw something, it was under the rug so he got his chair again and smashed it but it had left. He searched around the room but he still saw nothing. It appeared again under the rug and it was moving around. His chair was already smashed and broken so he went to grab another one. He kept hitting the ground and not able to get whatever was under the rug. It moved again, he smashed it as hard as he could but all that happened was, it rattled the whole house. It stayed under the rug while Ben kept on smashing it for about an hour. He kept one chasing it as it moved around under the rug. Then it came out from under the rug and moved around the whole room. But Ben couldn’t see it, he just kept feeling a breeze around him. Feeling a bit chilly he turned on the fire in attempt to get rid of whatever was in his house. This worked he saw whatever it was or figure of what it was. It was melting and begging for help so Ben helped him he turned off the fire and he stopped melting. Ben and the ‘ghost’ became friends and whenever it got cold the fire didn’t affect him because he was friends with the owner of the house and the only way he wouldn’t melt was to have friends.

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