W.A.L.T... Use appropriate language features for a pick a path story
I enjoyed doing this because I got to use coding for writing. Next time I will use more language features for my story.
Thursday, 21 September 2017
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Hi! It's Telesia from Room 8,Year 6.
ReplyDeleteI like that you put different choices, endings and moods in your game e.g if you chose to help the people who were fighting but don't pick up the rubbish, they will get mad at you. When you're in the room with the playground, the sentences are very long and it is a bit hard to see the options, so maybe next time, you could make them a bit shorter.
I am looking forward to hearing back from you!
Hi Telesia,
DeleteThank you for taking you time to comment on my post. I also noticed that it was a long sentence and tried to fix it by making the writing smaller. I didn't think to make the sentence shorter so that you for your feedback. Thank you again for looking at my post.